Sex Scenes!

couple-in-bed-mainYes that’s right, I’m discussing sex, well sex in books at least. These scenes are probably the most difficult to write. There’s a lot of emotion that needs showing among other things. The scenes I’ve had the blush worthy privilege of coming up with are, if I do say so myself, HOT. These particular scenes take me the longest, I want to write something that’s not gratuitous, something that’s not pornographic, but that conveys the actions per say of that part in the story. It needs to be tasteful, romantic and all that mushy stuff us girls want to read. I want to describe the body parts without sounding vulgar, which isn’t always easy. Those description are probably the least blush worthy as appose to what those body parts are doing… Below is an excerpt of the start of one of the love scenes—yeah let’s call a love scene instead—that I wrote. I could give you a peak of the more descriptive lines, but this ends up on my Facebook page and it would make me blush…

When He Came Back

Austin leaned back on his hunches, mouth open as he stared at Claire in complete and utter amazement. She smiled at him, leaned against the wall, and began to gather her long dress in her hands. Getting a hold of the hem, she slowly revealed her body to him, inch by painstaking inch. She pulled it over her head, laughing at the sharp intake of breath she heard from the man at her feet, and dropped the dress in his lap.

“Jesus, Claire, you’re not wearing any underwear.” He grabbed the dress and bunched the fabric in his hands.

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